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It was okay

Graphics: fairly above-average, but nothing special.
Sound: The song wasn't sung too well, and it had a bad message. First off, I don't know what a gringo or a beaner is, and I live in southern california. It was also saying that we shouldn't be racist when the whole song was negatively steriotyping Americans. Any arguement about us having your original land is just showing how your ancestors lost to us.
Style: Not really defined with this movie. The art style was a typical paintbrush outlined to a music video. Average.

It could go places, but this just didn't flow.

Graphics: There was minimal movement, as the art itself was just so-so.
Sound: The voice seemed too... non-adultish. For that kind of narration, I would have chosen somebody older, or with an older voice to do it.
Interactivity: -
Style: The story was a bit cheesy, and extremely uneventful
Violence: None
Humor: None
Overall: This has the ablity to go places, but you need to change some things. I would actually drop the whole narrator thing and let the viewers get to know the characters, and then have their destinies begin to unfold. Try to make the backgrounds and characters more consistant in art style, and get more movement in there.

Not too bad, but there's a ton of space for improvement.

~Masquatto

Nice, very nice indeed.

I'll admit that it was lacking in originality, which docked off a few points on style, but it was still quite funny. The animation was smooth, although I would recommend a smaller window, as to lower file size, and add a sharper picture. Overall, good work, and I look forward to seeing other pieces from you in the future.

Fifened.

~ Masquatto

DrNeroCF responds:

thanks for the feedback, but the movie was already rediculously small, then I expanded it in flash, so that's as low as that filesize is going to go, any worse quality would kill any time there's a lot of motion going on

Best Sprite Movie Ever

And I'm serious. I'm not a huge fan of most sprite movies, but this was excellent. It was long, but kept it's great animation the whole way. Definitely worth a ten.

Suggestion: Put shades on 'em. Lol. :-P

The Penny

That part was genious. The rest was so-so. The penny part got my laughing like crazy.

Erm... why was he shooting Richard Simmons with an Airsoft gun?

2 Big Problems:

1) Writing
2) Sounds

You have the animation talent, but I suggest you get another person to write.
As for the sound- just use Stream sounds instead of events sounds (it's in the sound panel).

Sorry, but this was sub-par, especially for a front page movie. You're close to being very good, but your flaws stand out so much right now that I can't yet call you close to being great.

Age 35, Male

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