Last night my TV went out and I got an idea I liked for an MGS collab part, so I started throwing it together, and this is what emerged...

THE RITZY MUSHROOM

Obviously, I haven't done the character visuals yet.
I'm not crazy about video game cartoons, but I am a fan of MGS, and most of my humor is pretty irrelevant to the game.
Also, I dunno if they'll accept it, as it's both a comm convo and over a minute long. Maybe its content redeems it, though. Who knows?
:S

My friends and I are all fans of old-timey humor, so they immediately loved it when I showed it to them, but I'm not so certain about random internet people, so I'm posting the dialogue in the hopes that you guys will lend me your opinions on it; did you find it funny?

EDIT: I was able to make a cut version that's only 42 seconds. How do you think it fares in comparison to the original?
THE CUT VERSION